Tuesday, October 12, 2004

Whose Press Release Is It, Anyway?

Ombudsman reader Brian Crecente, of the always excellent Red Assed Baboon, recently wrote me an e-mail with the somewhat accusatory title: "Plagarism or just being lazy?" Brian pointed me to a TeamXBox article that "apparently just cut and paste the press release and slapped a byline over it." Brian included a copy of the press release to prove his point and, sure enough, they are exactly the same (as far as I can tell). Brian asks, "I suppose it's shy of plagiarism since the people who wrote the press release will be ecstatic, but it seems unethical in some way. What do you think?"



Before answering, I felt I needed some more information, so I went straight to the source and e-mailed the article's author, TeamXBox News/Hardware Editor César A. Berardini, to ask a few basic questions about the article. His response appears in italics below, interspersed with my comments (not italicized). The bold-italics indicates my original questions to Cesar.



hi Kyle,



How is it going? Thanks for contacting TeamXbox. Regarding your question, yes, this is a "common practice", as you call it, not only on TeamXbox but in many other sites that focus on deliver [sic] news (instead of stories) first. It's been our style since 1999.




I deal with how much of a "common practice" this is below, but here I want to focus on delivering "news (instead of the stories) first." There's nothing wrong with that, but why not call a spade a spade and let the audience know that what they're reading was written by a public relations professional and not by you? This way you can get the information up quickly and still represent it fairly to the reader.



That article you mention sounds more like a media alert than a press release to me, and even press releases are modified a bit so they are easy to read. We also have found that companies don't like their info to be modified or edited and because we believe in freedom of speech for both parties, we let our visitors post any comment, no matter how hard that may sound to the company issuing that press info. As an example, everytime there is a news about an EA game, a user called FIG has tough comments about EA and its games. We have never deleted/edited his comments or anyone else's feedback.



Notwithstanding the difference between a "media alert" and a press release (a purely semantic one, as far as I can tell) I surely wouldn't advocate editing any PR information that came directly from a game company. Besides angering the PR folks, it would be more than a slight misrepresentation to, in effect, put words into their mouths. But I don't think it's any less of a misrepresentation to put up an unedited press release (or "media alert" or anything from a public relations person) and posting it under your byline with no indication of the true author, as was done here.



As for the comment about not editing comments, that is neither here nor there (but I do think it's a commendable stand).



Do you feel this is a common practice elsewhere in video game journalism? It used to be a common practice in PC news sites and TeamXbox introduced this style to video game news site. Then many other (video game coverage) sites followed us.



He's right, to an extent. A quick google search of the first ten words of the press release confirms that at least a handful of sites ran the press release verbatim. However, some of them actually identified the article as a press release, either by shouting FROM THE PRESS RELEASE, by using a more discrete [PR] note on the main page (though no indication appeared in the actual article page), or by grouping it under the "press releases" section of a newswire. TeamXBox did none of these things.



Do you feel it is clear to readers that this article is a press release and not original writing by yourself? Yes, it is clear to anyone when it is a press release since press releases have a format. "Company announced today that" (...) "Quote by executive" (...) "Game Description" Many of our visitors post the same press releases in our forums. They know they can find them in businesswire, yahoo! news or google news.



First of all, this article does not have any of those phrases or patterns in it and, to me, reads more like a quick news blurb than a press release (and I've read my fair share of both). I think it would be hard for an average reader to make this distinction, unless they troll "businesswire, yahoo! news or google news," regularly (which I assume most of them don't).



Press releases in forum posts are, again, a whole 'nother issue.



Does TeamXBox make any effort to make this clear to the reader? Same question again. There is no need for such a thing. The first thing you learn in journalism is that the audience is not dumb. They are smart and they always choose what they think is the best for them. One million users choose TeamXbox because they think it is the best site covering Xbox.



While I asked before if it was clear to the reader, here I'm asking what effort you make to make it clear to the reader. Obviously there is none. One of the first things I learned in journalism, actually, was to assume the reader is usually not as smart as you are on the particular topic you write about. After all, you write about it for a living, while they are just a random reader trying to learn more. They may not be dumb, but they don't necessarily have the savvy to figure out the difference between a press release and a poorly crafted article. What is "best for them" is probably knowing who actually wrote the article they are reading, no matter how many of them there are.



Do you feel there is anything wrong with putting your name in the byline of an article such as this that you did not write? No, there is nothing wrong with it since most of these news also include screenshots, movies and sometimes an editor's note. In the past, we used to have other fields (Source Name, Source URL, etc.) but they were discarded when we found out no one cared about them or clicked in those links. We started to use instead (like many other sites) a "thanks [source name+URL] for the heads-up" line.



First of all, I see no "thanks... for the heads-up" line anywhere in this article. Secondly, just because people don't click the link to find the same information you are reposting on your site (and why would they... they just read it) doesn't mean they don't care about the notice. Personally, I like to know when what I'm reading is written by a game company and not a game journalist, and I don't think I'm totally alone. The effort it would take to correctly source the article is not a siginificant barrier either. As for the point about screenshots and movies, those are often provided by the game company too. The editor's note might be by you, but it should be clear to the reader that the rest of the copy is not.



I hope these answers help you in your quest.



Let me add one more thing; I don't think there is a need to use a sentence such as "If I do not hear back from you, I will be forced to write on this matter without comment from you." for the simple reason it sounds more like a threat than an inquiry.




I included this line because it is true... I can't really write an article with a comment from you if I don't get a comment from you. But I did get a comment from you, and now I've commented on that comment. And the circle of life continues.



So, in answer to the original question, "plagiarism or just being lazy?" I'd have to say a little of both. Plagiarism because it doesn't correctly identify (or even hint at) the true author, and laziness because it would only take a few second to correctly identify (or even hint at) the true author.

10 comments:

  1. I kind of disagree with you... I've written PRs in the past for my games, and the advice given by experts is, precisely, to write in a format that makes it easy for the editor to copy and paste it. Well-written press releases which are already formatted the way the editor expects them increases the chances that your PR will be published. So editors copy and paste it? Well, that's the idea!

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  2. If you re-read my post, you'll see that I'm not against the verbatim copy-and-pasting of press releases in general. I am, however, in favor of identifying them as press releases and not misleadingly putting your byline at the top, implying that you wrote the thing. It's relatively easy to change a "By:" to a "Posted by:" and putsome disclaimer that "the following is a press release." Many sites do this. TeamXBox does not.

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  3. Yeah, putting a byline on a press release is just taking credit for writing something you didn't. Now if the person posting the press release had added some sort of information, that would be different.

    Even then, though, they should point out which part of the story is the company line and which part is the reporter actually doing some reporting.

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  4. More than the danger of plagiarism, I'm concerned about losing the trust of the reading public. If I as a "journalist" post a press release verbatim, given the bias inherent in most press release writing doesn't this diminish my objectivity as a journalist?

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  5. As a real life journalism professional I'll offer these things: 1. Lots of crappy lazy journalists put bylines on press releases that run verbatim. It's shameful and lazy and should be discouraged.

    2. I don't even put my byline on a press release that I've completely re-written.

    3. Unless I do some kind of reporting to add to the press release. (Such as adding some quotes or putting in additional facts and figures.)

    4. There is no reason to write: "f I do not hear back from you, I will be forced to write on this matter without comment from you." In an initial email, because, frankly, that pretty much goes without saying. It also tells your source that you expect them to treat you poorly. There is no shame, however, in putting that threat (it is a threat) in a follow up email.

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  6. It's just plain lazy, but it's endemic among fansites like TeamXbox. End of the day, you're not dealing with professional journalists here - you're talking about fanboy websites, which certainly have their place in the spectrum of coverage, but which do stuff like copying and pasting press releases as news, or worse, copying and pasting news from other sites verbatim and sticking their own byline on it.

    If someone like Gamespot, or Eurogamer, or 1up or whatever did this - that'd be a major issue. When it's TeamXbox, it's just hard to care about it. It really is "common practice" among fan-driven sites as opposed to professional sites.

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  7. I too am a professional journalist, with ten years working for daily newspaper and five covering gaming andI agree with all of the above except the last item.
    While it may lead a person to think they will be mistreated you have to in some way let them know that the article is running with or without comment.
    It probably would be better to just say, "I'm writing an article that will be running XXX and would like a comment from you. Please reply by XXXX to have your comments included. Thanks for your time."
    But really that's just about symantics.
    Re-writing press releases is wrong, this cock and bull story about trying to respect the PR person's original copy is either a lame attempt at covering up laziness or some serious lack of understanding when it comes to journalism.

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  8. I too am a professional journalis, with ten years working for daily newspaper and five covering gaming andI agree with all of the above except the last item.
    While it may lead a person to think they will be mistreated you have to in some way let them know that the article is running with or without comment.
    It probably would be better to just say, "I'm writing an article that will be running XXX and would like a comment from you. Please reply by XXXX to have your comments included. Thanks for your time."
    But really that's just about symantics.
    Re-writing press releases is wrong, this cock and bull story about trying to respect the PR person's original copy is either a lame attempt at covering up laziness or some serious lack of understanding when it comes to journalism.

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  9. I too am a professional journalist, with ten years working for daily newspaper and five covering gaming andI agree with all of the above except the last item.
    While it may lead a person to think they will be mistreated you have to in some way let them know that the article is running with or without comment.
    It probably would be better to just say, "I'm writing an article that will be running XXX and would like a comment from you. Please reply by XXXX to have your comments included. Thanks for your time."
    But really that's just about symantics.
    Re-writing press releases is wrong, this cock and bull story about trying to respect the PR person's original copy is either a lame attempt at covering up laziness or some serious lack of understanding when it comes to journalism.

    ReplyDelete
  10. I too am a professional journalist, with ten years working for daily newspaper and five covering gaming andI agree with all of the above except the last item.
    While it may lead a person to think they will be mistreated you have to in some way let them know that the article is running with or without comment.
    It probably would be better to just say, "I'm writing an article that will be running XXX and would like a comment from you. Please reply by XXXX to have your comments included. Thanks for your time."
    But really that's just about symantics.
    Re-writing press releases is wrong, this cock and bull story about trying to respect the PR person's original copy is either a lame attempt at covering up laziness or some serious lack of understanding when it comes to journalism.

    ReplyDelete